such a great job with this picture the view of the landscape is just a amzing job the girl is well drawn the only problem i could have with it there looks like there is a slight blush on her face if you wanted to do that make it a bit brighter to make it more clear on her face overall i have to say a wonderful job on this picture i would give it a 4.5 on this the only reason its not a five is that its hard to see the title and hard to make out the background a bit but overall great job
The light beside the mountain with the moon up above plus the Tokyo City view give your art a big impact at the audience. That when they will see this art, their 1st reaction will be "It's awesome!". Plus the lighting effect that you do on the character makes it more awesome. No more problem on the text part because you give more emphasis to the background and the character itself. Overall, I give you a perfect score. That's because your art itself is AWESOME and the originality of yours. Good Job, keep it up.. Good luck for the contest.